Help rank my 2204 four line poems by contributing your votes to a Ladder. (see Ladder)


Discussion only goes so far.
You've got no sunshine. And I'm Oak.
"Someone" is still in there. So stay with me.
Exteriors change. Wise won't.
If I could have a magic wish.
I'd see in five dimensions.
The fifth would show true distances.
From chance hope and ascensions.

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